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Peeling Away Layers

Gone, gone, are the gardens I knew Gone are the springtime roses that grew I cannot blame the onions for my tears I cannot blame the springtime, or the summer Or the snowfalls in the winter Layer, by layer, the years that flew have peeled away small points of view… Nature can soften, and gentle the rain Quiet the memory, numbing the pain But time can erase loving faces I knew, I miss them so, I miss them so… When once to focus, and see so clear What used to be, is barely there Photos, in my memory, that I want to keep Layer by layer, to disappear Why must they fade, why must they dim? How will I know them, if we meet again? Layer by layer, with the years that flew I miss them so,…I miss them so… __________________________________ For the Contest Sponsored By Susan Burch: "Missing" 2/8/12

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Date: 3/13/2012 3:31:00 PM
A beautiful write, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 5:30:00 PM
A perfect lesson you've given us about living to the fullest in the present! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:51:00 PM
This is so touching Carrie.Yours is Different from the others.Congrats!It goes to my Favs.
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:12:00 PM
Carrie congrats on your win, very profound..David
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:18:00 AM
congrats Carrie on another exquisite write and win for Missing.. deeply profound words luv..
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Where do those memories go? I liked the idea of layers peeling away.
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:47:00 PM
yes, yes, I so agree with this one and I really adore the poetic nature of it. one of the BEST I've seen for this contest.
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Date: 3/8/2012 5:56:00 PM
I do understand the pain expressed in this poem AND the fear of losing one's memory, Carrie. What a tremendously eloquent way to approach this topic. The questions you scroll thru in the last stanza really solidify this write. Awesome. Love, Gwendolen
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