Peeling Away Layers

Gone, gone, are the gardens I knew
Gone are the springtime roses that grew
I cannot blame the onions for my tears
I cannot blame the springtime, or the summer
Or the snowfalls in the winter
Layer, by layer, the years that flew
have peeled away small points of view…

Nature can soften, and gentle the rain
Quiet the memory, numbing the pain
But time can erase loving faces I knew,
I miss them so, I miss them so…

When once to focus, and see so clear
What used to be, is barely there
Photos, in my memory, that I want to keep
Layer by layer, to disappear

Why must they fade, why must they dim?
How will I know them, if we meet again?
Layer by layer, with the years that flew
I miss them so,…I miss them so…

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For the Contest Sponsored By Susan Burch: "Missing"
2/8/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:31 PM
A beautiful write, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 5:30 PM
A perfect lesson you've given us about living to the fullest in the present! Congrad's Light & Love
Poet Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 1:51 PM
This is so touching Carrie.Yours is Different from the others.Congrats!It goes to my Favs.
Williams Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Carrie congrats on your win, very profound..David
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Carrie. Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:18 AM
congrats Carrie on another exquisite write and win for Missing.. deeply profound words luv..
Susan Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your win! Where do those memories go? I liked the idea of layers peeling away.
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:47 PM
yes, yes, I so agree with this one and I really adore the poetic nature of it. one of the BEST I've seen for this contest.
Song Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 5:56 PM
I do understand the pain expressed in this poem AND the fear of losing one's memory, Carrie. What a tremendously eloquent way to approach this topic. The questions you scroll thru in the last stanza really solidify this write. Awesome. Love, Gwendolen
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