Peel Away the Sorrow

Peeling you like an onion
Until I reach to your heart
Burning away the sorrow
Before it rips you apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 25, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Sounds like you are acting in kindness.
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