Peek a Boo

Etched between two pines 
                             shaven mountain crest

Beneath benchmarker
                               lined  tombstones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 20, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Wow! This is an awesome poem! Wonderful use of imagery. It was so good to hear from you--thank you for your kind comment. Hope life is treating you kindly. Have a good weekend. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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March 15, 2010 at 1:14 AM
Katherine thanks for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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March 15, 2010 at 12:21 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Constance.Rgds Brian
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March 14, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Awesome Katherne. I'll have to try one of these Monoku forms sometime. Per your comment on "Nano Uno" I don't think we have near as much to fear from these paranormal visitors, as we do from our own misguided understanding of their intention. Their intention toward us is Agape, I'm convienced.Smile! Agape, Moses
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March 14, 2010 at 1:52 AM
Death is everywhere. The death of a child is especially difficult. Nice write. And thank you, Katherine, for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Whether in Your Neck of the Woods” blog. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 13, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Katherine.Rgds Brian
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March 13, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Katherine.Rgds Brian
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March 13, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Amazingly vivid imagery in this poem, Katherine. The reader can really see it just as you describe. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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March 13, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Interesting write...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara
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