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Pediatric Ward

"Code Blue!" Baby blue, blue baby, nurses crying Years of yearning, a lifetime's dreams. Hold me.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2023 9:17:00 AM

Dear Tom, your poetic brevity is urgent, gripping, impactful and mournful. The title and poem work seamlessly together to create a heartbreaking piece! The last line is one to linger over. A potent little package of poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tom Pickering
Date: 10/19/2023 3:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Just starting the journey - still got a long way to walk.