Bernardo F. Asuncion Poet Haiku

pedestrian lane hiku

For Brian Strand's 1393 Poetry Contest

26 June 2025
Contest Judged:  7/1/2025 9:06:00 PM
1st Place




        ____
      /         \
      l  STOP l                  
      \_____/                        
            l      _____________
            l    /===========\     white lines guide the way,
             /   //  // // ll \\ \\  \\   \  
         /    //  //  //   ll  \\  \\  \\    \      footsteps soft on sun-warmed path,
      /    //   //   //    ll   \\   \\  \\     \
   / =====================\
/_______safe passage for all._______\

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Speaks Volumes August 14, 2025 at 9:45 AM Not only a Poet but an artist ! Today I looked at all your Hiku's. You have wonderful perception, and untold bravery to begin creating such amazing visions and such arduous tasks. I am impressed beyond belief. Such talent. Bernardo F. Asuncion August 14, 2025 at 4:34 PM Thank you, dear friend poet. God bless.~BFA

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2025 at 2:38 PM Very nice, Bernard Bernardo F. Asuncion July 2, 2025 at 4:54 PM Thanks, Ma'am Rea.

JC Brul July 2, 2025 at 5:19 AM Whoa, this is so cool!! ^__^ Bernardo F. Asuncion July 2, 2025 at 4:56 PM Much thanks, dear Sister JCB @@^