Franco Gonza Poet Lyric

Pedestal Breaking

While I watch her, an adored jewel,
Flinging on with my old pal
She crashes from the pedestal,
Like a burst of glass
As love etches death on the alley.


Contest:Fallen in 25-30 Words, nette onclaud
from Franco Gonza
2 December 2015
- my past girlfriend
30 words

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Teddy Kimathi December 7, 2015 at 4:29 PM Hi Franco. Congratulations for your winning lyrcal verse! ;-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2015 at 9:29 PM Congrats on superb win with this wonderful write Franco!

Skat A December 4, 2015 at 8:08 PM Congratulations Franco. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2015 at 7:02 PM this is really GOOD writing, Franco. A well deserved win!!

Rob Carmack December 4, 2015 at 6:12 PM Easy come but not so easy to go sometimes. Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud December 4, 2015 at 4:23 PM she really fell 'like a burst of glass', franco...sweet fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs!

Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 3:57 PM powerfully penned Franco congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A December 3, 2015 at 12:05 AM Franco, Enjoyed your write. SKAT

Countess Arditezza December 2, 2015 at 10:03 AM Well done, a very visual poem. I like this very much