Pedants
Impress
with your meaning
not with your word choice
‘Labyrinth’
dallies
when ‘Mazes’ will do
Build
toward an ending
the shorter the better
The Bullet
strikes deepest
—straight fired and true
(Dreamsleep: September, 2023)
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