Pebbles

Kieselsteine / Pebbles / Guijarros Die Kieselsteine So herrlich glänzend leuchtend Im klaren Bergbach Colourful pebbles So lovely bright and shining In the mountain creek Colorido guijarros Hermoso y brillante y luminosa En el arroyo

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2011 10:10:00 PM

A WONDERFUL POEM GERT,, vividly bright and i love the scenery... have a great saint Patrick's day,,,, take care,..p.d.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/16/2011 8:18:00 AM

This one conjures up a lovely picture, Gert. And it looks so beautiful written in German! So sad about Helga and her whole family. The theatre, where I work, recently staged a play about Anne Frank - very moving indeed. I suppose that, rightly or wrongly, Anne Frank has come to represent all the victims for many of us. It was very touching to hear of an individual like Helga. Have a great day : ) Jack

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/15/2011 8:52:00 PM

Well done, Gert! Merci beaucoup pour les gentils commentaires sur mes poèmes! Alles Gute! Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2011 3:22:00 PM

This is lovely too!! like those colorful pebbles.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/15/2011 1:47:00 PM

Nice observation and nicely penned with great images, Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2011 11:18:00 AM

What an image, Gert. I would love to see the pebbles sparkling in the creek. Exquisite poem, my friend. People used to leave old bottles on the beach in NJ. As they broke apart and were brushed and polished by the ocean, they looked like the "colorful pebbles" you describe so well here. Hope your arm is healing, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 3/15/2011 8:52:00 AM

Yes! The sun sparkles those pebbles. this is beautiful. The Spanish is also beautiful, maybe even more so. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2011 8:14:00 AM

Oh I luv writing about luv Gert my friend as u luv writing these brilliant visual lines so intriguing and so entertaining luv.. u set the stage so openly and invite the reader to enjoy the view .. thankxx luv...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/15/2011 7:54:00 AM

lines 1 & 2 evoke wonderful sensation, I think you should work on the CUT line 3, I don't think you have a cut? perhaps I'm wrong though? Light & Love always