Pebble

My heart
A pebble in water
Where your constant loving
Flows over me.
Keeping it clean
Every time, everyday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Congrats Robert on your 8th place win in the stones contest luv with this great piece..
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 10:55 PM
Wonderful, short but replete with warm sentiment. congrats on your win.
Taylor Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Congrats on your win, Bob. Nice going. Ralph
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 3:25 PM
robert, warm cheers to you for an awesome win... love the way you depicted pebbles..:) huggs!
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Catie's "Stoned" contest Robert. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 8:42 PM
wonderful.. enjoyed your poem,, have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..p.d.
Mantle Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Lovely piece. Great imagery. Best wishes Em :)
Benson Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Wow! A really fine piece, well done Robert, best wishes.
Hornschuch Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:36 AM
very nice imagery. look forward to reading more...
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