Pebble

My heart A pebble in water Where your constant loving Flows over me. Keeping it clean Every time, everyday.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/10/2011 11:27:00 AM

Congrats Robert on your 8th place win in the stones contest luv with this great piece..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2011 10:55:00 PM

Wonderful, short but replete with warm sentiment. congrats on your win.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/9/2011 8:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Bob. Nice going. Ralph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2011 6:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/9/2011 3:25:00 PM

robert, warm cheers to you for an awesome win... love the way you depicted pebbles..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2011 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Catie's "Stoned" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/20/2011 8:42:00 PM

wonderful.. enjoyed your poem,, have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..p.d.

Emma Mantle

Date: 7/20/2011 6:14:00 AM

Lovely piece. Great imagery. Best wishes Em :)

Ingibo Benson

Date: 7/20/2011 5:44:00 AM

Wow! A really fine piece, well done Robert, best wishes.

Michael Hornschuch

Date: 7/20/2011 5:36:00 AM

very nice imagery. look forward to reading more...