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Peat-Whisky Dreams

Evening finds ascension
on a red grouse wing;
the brilliant copper sky 
fades to twilight beam.
 
 
It wafts the weathered flora
of a season’s ending term,
as young skylarks soundly sleep
in the nearby bracken fern.
 
 
The purple hue glints playfully
on a steep highland muir,
with lovers lying blythesome 
on the fragrant heather floor,
 
 
their drunk love on crescendo
with a piper's distant drone;
sharing peat-whisky dreams
amid the summer’s final gloam.




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Most pleasant read, Thvia. Totally delightful with all its imagery.
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Beautiful write, Thvia,
Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Lovely, Thvia.
Cresswell Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Delicate as Irish lace and just as beautiful.
Fleming Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 9:14 AM
I love the feeling this little poem imparts...like a smoothly blended whisky - Lovely! My very best, Thvia - Cheers! :) john
O'Leary Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Wonderful imagery and feeling!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 1:26 PM
When I visit Poetry Soup to read poetry it is for poems such as this one I am searching for. Your work is outstanding! I am fav'ng this remarkable poem too! Blessings Thvia. Aloha, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 4:36 AM
BEAUTIFUL my friend - Just stopping by to say I miss you on the Soup! - Tim
Shetley Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 3:29 PM
aww thanks Tim, I finally wrote one today after 18 months. I need to be more consistent!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 2:34 PM
a subbtle erotic piece. Well expressed.
Guzzi Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Just lovely Thvia nice to read your verse again. Light & Love
Kithinji Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:06 PM
And to think it wasn't the famous grouse!
Orozco Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Beautiful poem! -Edward
Hicks Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 10:05 PM
I find it difficult to write a poem layered with such fancy wording, but you seem to do it well. I agree with previous commentors, it has a real nice fantasy ring to it.
The Gypsy King Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 6:31 AM
Words that paint a picture........art.
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 10:51 AM
Hi Thvia just came to read your latest poem, I will come back soon.....David
Situation Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Perfectly writen! No over use of colors and rhyming that would satisfy any poet.
Jordan Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 3:03 PM
very nice. You've painted a wonderful word poem. Jack
A   Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Thvia, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on your win. Connie
Eastman Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 12:19 PM
So beautifully written... Congrats on your win.
Squyres Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:27 AM
It lives, it breathes, it leaves this reader speechles...you have talent !! enjoyed the read and Congrats on the win !! woo hoo !!
Ober Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Holy gorgeous write!! Congrats!
Chircop Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 8:46 AM
just beautifully written..Wonderful
O'Leary Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Wonderful imagery, and flow... great all round... Terry
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 11:46 PM
Yes, I think it might fit that theme of fantasy. Because of the way you call it dreams!!!
Shetley Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 12:59 AM
I submitted it yesterday, crossing fingers
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