Howard Kerr Poet Fibonacci

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Pearl-Eyed Riser Part Two

Blue 
Waves 
usher
ocean  dream
enchanting ripples,
whose hypnotic spell oozes charm,
for  yellow dawn pearl-eyed first light  riser’s coastal fog,
 stunned by the heavenly turquoise canvass  of tidal moss  fleck swoon and swirl  gyrations 

On 
shore 
visions
magic sweep
splashy catalyst
at the cusp of exotic veil
uncanny blissful streams tantalising ebb and flow 
a lure for august swimmer mesmerised by mammoth currents awash with silver froth 

Gust
of 
saline 
grain torrents
that skim cliff edges
taunt emboldened in situ bard,
where farsighted jostling amid picturesque quaint beach,
spurs bright imaginary floodgates, a deluge of opulent visual fantasm

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Sara Kendrick February 18, 2024 at 8:09 AM Very verbose lines about the view of the ocean which is so appealing to some. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Sotto Poet January 22, 2024 at 12:16 PM This amiable and excellently written Fibonacci persists from the first to the last line. The significance of the following stanza cannot be overstated. Excellent work.

Hilda Greenhough January 22, 2024 at 8:49 AM This is a well penned and welcoming Fibonacci that continues from a first write. This poem, the second of the series, is changed noticeably with a sense of being 'peopled'. Both poems have a splashing dose of the ocean, which puts the reader at the ocean's edge.