Howard Kerr Poet Fibonacci

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Pearl-Eyed Riser

Blue 
Waves 
usher
ocean dream
enchanting ripples,
whose hypnotic spell oozes charm,
for yellow dawn pearl-eyed first light riser’s inner fog,
stunned by a heavenly turquoise canvass  of tidal moss fleck swoon and swirl gyrations

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Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 6:54 AM I can see the scene. The ocean can be hypnotic if one is on the shores and not out in the middle. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Ink Empress January 27, 2024 at 10:48 AM Brilliant imagery and flow of words, and amazing picture to go with your fibonacci. I loved the way you’ve delivered it. Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing this Howard Kerr January 27, 2024 at 10:56 AM Dear Ink Empress, Many thanks for reading, evaluating, and of course considering my effort worthy of placement. It’s very much appreciated Howard

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2024 at 10:03 AM Gorgeous, Howard Howard Kerr January 22, 2024 at 10:31 AM I appreciate your comment, Andrea. Thanks for your soupmail contact Howard

Sara Kendrick January 22, 2024 at 4:25 AM Very descriptive work you have penned in this Fibonacci sequence. I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara k Howard Kerr January 22, 2024 at 4:49 AM Complements on my piece such as yours leave an indelible mark. They are a spur to future challenges. So pleased my work has brought joy to you Howard k

Hilda Greenhough January 21, 2024 at 10:13 AM This resonates with me for the times I witnesed such beauty. Sounds of the wording move and swirl like the ocean. I like this Fibonacci. Howard Kerr January 21, 2024 at 10:56 AM I have learned so much as a writer from your precise analysis of this and my other submissions. It’s very complementary that this piece resonates with you. You noticed pivotal words that are the backbone of this work Howard