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Peacock Sighting

Prancing peacock Taking in the sunshine of dawn, Prancing peacock Calling its mate by its honk-squawk, Its plush plumage makes you look on, You gaze at it with breath indrawn, Prancing peacock.

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/13/2025 1:34:00 AM

DID THIS REALLY happen? Were you truly blessed with the presence of a real-life male peacock of such magnificent beauty one could study him happily for hours? If true, did he see you seeing him, was he concerned? I don't recall how they sound! Can you tell I am peacock-excited right now? I feel like a kid, inundating you with questions. My Granny gave me a peacock ring when I was twelve and I still wear it. Well, obviously I enjoyed your write and appreciated it much. CayCay

Joseph May

Date: 5/9/2025 3:32:00 PM

Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2025 6:47:00 AM

You described the actions of a peacock very well here...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/5/2025 3:03:00 AM

A well-written poem, very balance a so well done. I love peacocks.