Peacock

Peacock
Beautiful Blue
Dancing Fanning  Feathering
Dainty, Pretty, Proud, Precious
Bird

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Arlene Binner

May 24, 2019 at 1:01 PM

I read a few of your poems, and really enjoyed them. Arlene

Sima Mittal

March 24, 2020 at 2:45 PM

thanks!

Franci Hoffman

May 21, 2019 at 6:55 PM

I love your imagery for the peacock!

Sima Mittal

March 24, 2020 at 2:45 PM

thanks

Betty Bateson

April 17, 2013 at 9:47 AM

I can see him strutting around. Betty

Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2013 at 5:26 PM

those are the right adjectives to define a peacock!!

Kash Poet

April 16, 2013 at 1:48 AM

Beautiful poem Sima.But I am afraid the syllable count is not 2/4/6/8/2.Welcome to poetrysoup.

Sima Mittal

April 16, 2013 at 2:14 AM

modern cinquains are word counts not syllable!

Kathryn Collins

April 14, 2013 at 9:00 AM

I love this beautiful portrayal of the peacock. To the amazing point and brief -- my favorite combination in a talented poet. Kathy

Sima Mittal

April 15, 2013 at 1:36 AM

thanks

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2013 at 12:15 PM

Sima, this is a nice cinquain, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

Sima Mittal

April 15, 2013 at 1:36 AM

thanks

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