Peacock

Peacock Beautiful Blue Dancing Fanning Feathering Dainty, Pretty, Proud, Precious Bird

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Date: 5/24/2019 1:01:00 PM

I read a few of your poems, and really enjoyed them. Arlene

Sima Mittal
Date: 3/24/2020 2:45:00 PM

thanks!

Date: 5/21/2019 6:55:00 PM

I love your imagery for the peacock!

Sima Mittal
Date: 3/24/2020 2:45:00 PM

thanks

Date: 4/17/2013 9:47:00 AM

I can see him strutting around. Betty

Date: 4/16/2013 5:26:00 PM

those are the right adjectives to define a peacock!!

Date: 4/16/2013 1:48:00 AM

Beautiful poem Sima.But I am afraid the syllable count is not 2/4/6/8/2.Welcome to poetrysoup.

Sima Mittal
Date: 4/16/2013 2:14:00 AM

modern cinquains are word counts not syllable!

Date: 4/14/2013 9:00:00 AM

I love this beautiful portrayal of the peacock. To the amazing point and brief -- my favorite combination in a talented poet. Kathy

Sima Mittal
Date: 4/15/2013 1:36:00 AM

thanks

Date: 4/13/2013 12:15:00 PM

Sima, this is a nice cinquain, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

Sima Mittal
Date: 4/15/2013 1:36:00 AM

thanks