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Peacock

A fluorescent dome By unravelling its elongated tail Loves to roam Down the solitary dale Dances soberly when finds its female PLACE: 3 rd

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/22/2025 3:19:00 AM

Peacocks are so confident, and roam around as if they own the world, but when the male displays his tail for a female he is sober yes, and focused. Thanks for the image in your poem. J:)

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/22/2025 9:05:00 PM

Well said! Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/5/2025 8:41:00 PM

Everyone loves peacocks. Thanks for the bird insight.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/6/2025 5:17:00 AM

Thanks a lot for reading my lines.

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/4/2025 3:28:00 AM

nice, and pretty, wishes yann

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/4/2025 9:26:00 AM

Thank you so much.