Peacock

A fluorescent dome
By unravelling its elongated tail
Loves to roam 
Down the solitary dale
Dances soberly when finds its female


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Swan Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Peacocks are so confident, and roam around as if they own the world, but when the male displays his tail for a female he is sober yes, and focused. Thanks for the image in your poem. J:)
Venkata Ramana Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Well said! Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.
Greenhough Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 8:41 PM
Everyone loves peacocks. Thanks for the bird insight.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 5:17 AM
Thanks a lot for reading my lines.
Rolland Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 3:28 AM
nice, and pretty, wishes yann
Venkata Ramana Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so much.
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