Peach Fields

When peach fields become lavender, birds sing love melodies
Last year's nests are made over, plowed fields are ready to plant
Will you think of me in my spring dress giving you a hug

lovespringsijo

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Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2024 at 1:25 PM

This is so pretty, Sara. Thanks for entering my contest with your lovely sijo. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick

February 5, 2024 at 2:56 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea for stopping by to let me know I placed and give me a nice review. Sara K

Howard Kerr

January 20, 2024 at 9:01 AM

Sara, A haunting magnum opus hovers elegantly over the page. I can imbibe the invigorating scene and the sentiment which underpins it. Howard

Sara Kendrick

January 20, 2024 at 11:51 AM

Why, Howard. Your review is uplifting. Sara K

Silent One

January 17, 2024 at 11:43 AM

oooh lovely imagery, especially the first line.. Is this the one?? I think so..

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2024 at 5:01 PM

SO, yes, finally. I think so. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

January 17, 2024 at 8:57 AM

Oh my, this is one of the most beautiful sijo poems I've read so far.. So magically done, dear Sara! Your wordsmithery feels so elegant and effortless here, flowing with a lovely rhythm and mystical fragrance.. "When peach fields become lavender, birds sing love melodies" Ahh, I really like that opening.. So wonderful! "Will you think of me in my spring dress ready to hug you" There's a soulful & heartfelt essence in these lines.. So touching and evocative. I really loved reading this, a FAV :)

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2024 at 9:52 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya, for faving it and with a smiley face. I am glad you express such high regards for it. Sara K