Peach Chant

nectar from a peach
dribbles down the chin--sticky
and sweet--season's first.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 7:29 PM
Carol, girl, I think I have SEen ALL your poetry now!! I just keep landing on one right after the other that I have seen. you have great talent. I hope to see more and more new poetry from you , sweetie!
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Very descriptive work about the peach..Enjoyed the thoughts of the first peach of summer..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 10:14 PM
CARol, I think I may have seen all your poems now. I await more gems from you. LUv, Andrea
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August 10, 2010 at 11:46 PM
Good sensations in this one!
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June 19, 2010 at 10:07 AM
a good description of the person eating the peach, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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June 19, 2010 at 6:56 AM
ooh, you got my taste buds tingling with this one. Great haiku, although it's nectarines for me, I don't like the texture of peach skin. Just off to wipe my chin ;) ~ Sharon
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