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Peacefully Will Come Freedom

wished i was like 2 doves free in the twirling hollow sky, flying up so so high with no worry's set in my mind. the freedom to fly around so peacefully maybe take a peak upabove those golden pearly gates just to see , or have that taste what being free is really like , 2 doves setting in the sunset hwat a beautiful image to see deep in my mind , only if life was that simple , i think we all would be a little bit crowded to see the moonlight. , as time slips i fade into the real world here i call hell . one day peacefully with faith also joy i will reach that beautiful milestone in time , till then i have to carry on and proceed to take care of what is mine!, god bless the broken , shallow, souls here on hells ground, . smile because you know peqacefully in mind you will be set aside to fly high into that big glassy blue set mysterious faithful sky . keep your head held high . freedom is our soul its the key to happiness in the sky of dreams that come true. the angels sing you a lulu by for know to ease your broken heartached mind . happiness is the key to freedom like 2 doves sitting and watching that beautiful sunset!!

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/27/2017 2:21:00 AM

A very beaiputiful write, your feelings are clear in this one and that s a good thing, well life isn t that easy, everybody wish it would ve, but it isn t, you ve written it beautifully but remember, we ve a very specific reason for being in this world, that is to do ggod deeds and make God pleased, we should give importance to it first because money, respect everything will be gone, nothing will left,beautifully written, their are some spelling mistakes which you should re check like what

Ashley Rainwater

Date: 10/24/2016 10:43:00 PM