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Peaceful Presence

Slowly find a quiet place, Which captures your heart and comforts your soul. Where moments of peace, Weave into a web of complete perfection. ---oooOooo--- Free as a cloud, Your spirit reaches out to a horizon without any limitations. Yesterday`s memories, Drowned slowly with painless relief. ---oooOooo--- Walk the earth gently, Where a thousand sun`s rays dance on the days to come. Far in the distance The past disappears like a dark emotion over the edge without regret. ---oooOooo--- Silence is this moment, Away from a life where there are no reservations. Presented by time for soul`s renovation. As moments of truth offer us life`s gratification. ---oooOooo--- Soft sounds with soothing affection, Reaches the mind on the soft evening breath. The day waves good night to the sky with tender emotion. Leaving the soul with a gentle reflection. ---oooOooo--- With a wandering mind, The eye catches the footprints left by yesterdays dreams. A slow wandering pace into a future offered by tomorrow`s beliefs. Slowly time meets at the edge, where moon`s rays dances on the end of the day. ---oooOooo--- Magic is born, When the stars` promises dance on the moonlight`s thoughts Yesterday is lost in time, to open up space for another tomorrow to come. The soul reaches peace when the magic of the moments meet. ---oooOooo---

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Date: 8/6/2016 4:10:00 AM
Sounds good to me!
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Date: 7/28/2016 10:32:00 PM
I love it
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Elizabeth Frost
Date: 7/31/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you Stephan for reading my poem and your reply ~E
Date: 7/23/2016 8:55:00 PM
Elizabeth, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Elizabeth Frost
Date: 7/24/2016 3:06:00 AM
Thank you Linda....for your reply. I am new at this, Afrikaans speaking, learning this beautiful language. I love words, love to learn new words and also what they mean but learning to use them will make a lot of mistakes. I would love some help, criticism will help me to improve. Thank you again. ~E
Date: 7/19/2016 8:06:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup , great first write
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Elizabeth Frost
Date: 7/20/2016 12:46:00 AM
Thank you James ~E
Date: 7/18/2016 12:33:00 PM
EF, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Elizabeth Frost
Date: 7/19/2016 12:42:00 AM
Thank you Manmath Dalei....for reading my poem and the reply. ~E
Date: 7/18/2016 3:40:00 AM
By the way, Elizabeth, your poem is peaceful and I fully enjoyed. Skat
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Elizabeth Frost
Date: 7/18/2016 3:43:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT, ~E
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Elizabeth Frost
Date: 7/18/2016 3:42:00 AM
Thank you for reading and posting a comment...I am Afrikaans speaking, learning this beautiful language...I am new at this and any help will really be appreciated... Thank you for the welcome.
Date: 7/18/2016 3:37:00 AM
Elizabeth,,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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