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Peaceful Mountain

Clouds on the mountain,
Reflecting off the water;
An image of peace.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 24, 2009 at 7:50 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Hope all is well with YOU and YOURS I don,t see any new POST I think I told YOU I live on top of a mountain I see this as a Perfect Haiku LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 12, 2009 at 4:04 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Such serenity expressed I live on top of a mountain, often surrounded by clouds YOU have captured peacefulness perfectly LOVEYOUr Poetic Genius ALWAYS...H G

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2009 at 4:39 PM

Elizabeth, mountains and oceans always offer such serenity. Great work! (I wrote a poem about a mountain, too, but yours is far more concise!) Happy Valentine's Day - Carolyn

Daniel Neal

January 6, 2009 at 1:23 PM

Beautiful scene you captured with words. DN

Raul Moreno

January 5, 2009 at 6:00 PM

Nice work, I love you way you paint a beautiful picture with just a few words...Raul

Carrie Richards

January 5, 2009 at 4:27 PM

A lovely picture this makes in my mind. ~ Great haiku!~Carrie

Monica Engeler

January 5, 2009 at 3:10 PM

Sounds peaceful to me. I see your words in my mind. Nice.

Derrick Burton

January 5, 2009 at 3:02 PM

silence and the sounds of relaxation always gives me the feelings of peace as well. Short yet powerful poetry and I really enjoyed reading it. Have a nice dayl.