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Last night's grief was filled with a serene dawn. Woodsmoke and scalded spices flood the air. The darkened sunlight disclaims treads the lawn. Last night's grief was filled with a serene dawn. Its frail hand yet brings in a shift of fawn. A dream, like a toenail, is a brief dare. Last night's grief was filled with a serene dawn. Woodsmoke and scalded spices flood the air.
Written: February 26, 2023

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Date: 2/27/2023 12:05:00 PM
Great triolet verse, Lasaad, full of imagery and feelings. Blessings my friend
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Date: 2/27/2023 6:40:00 AM
Mesmerizing! So good to be back and read your poems again, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings!
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Date: 2/27/2023 2:25:00 AM
Great imagery and use of senses.
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