Peace of Day

Now sliding in peace the hues of day
Maybe this I fully  know
Above the groves, the lonely plains
Of deepened soot and down to where
The busy metro huffs below--
Again I feel the minty dawn
Swell inside my breath  till all 
Of chilly mist is softly drawn.


Contest entry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 23, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian Strand's contest. "Minty dawn" is my favorite!
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