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Peace Lilies

peace lilies' cobra
blooms reach over jacuzzie..
achoo peace disturbed  

To me the Peace Lilies
blossoms look like 
a Cobra's Hood...

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Nette Onclaud

September 25, 2013 at 11:42 PM

charmingly done, sara... are the lilies full of pollen?.. i enjoy the imagery of it all!.. :) huggs

Liam Mcdaid

September 25, 2013 at 7:36 PM

lovely piece sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 25, 2013 at 4:18 PM

Sara, lovely haiku !!! - All the best to you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

September 25, 2013 at 4:16 PM

Hey Sara, Nicely done..I liked this one.. Ken

Linda Jackson

September 25, 2013 at 1:45 PM

The haiku is very well written. I like the description of the peace lillies. Best wishes Linda x

Chandrasekar Singaram

September 25, 2013 at 11:25 AM

Great work :)

Russell Sivey

September 25, 2013 at 5:52 AM

This is a tremendous write, I am intrigued by the relation between peace lilies and a cobra, interesting my friend! This whole poem is truly wonderful! I truly enjoyed reading this remarkable piece this morning! What a brilliant poem, such a delightful verse, Great Work!!

John Loving Iii

September 25, 2013 at 5:41 AM

I figured that out

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2013 at 4:09 PM

Sara, was that a sneeze? I never heard of cobra blooms before. How unique. I think maybe you meant to say disturbed in the last line? But it got a typo.

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