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Peace Lilies

peace lilies' cobra blooms reach over jacuzzie.. achoo peace disturbed To me the Peace Lilies blossoms look like a Cobra's Hood...

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2013 11:42:00 PM

charmingly done, sara... are the lilies full of pollen?.. i enjoy the imagery of it all!.. :) huggs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/25/2013 7:36:00 PM

lovely piece sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 4:18:00 PM

Sara, lovely haiku !!! - All the best to you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/25/2013 4:16:00 PM

Hey Sara, Nicely done..I liked this one.. Ken

Linda Jackson

Date: 9/25/2013 1:45:00 PM

The haiku is very well written. I like the description of the peace lillies. Best wishes Linda x

Chandrasekar Singaram

Date: 9/25/2013 11:25:00 AM

Great work :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/25/2013 5:52:00 AM

This is a tremendous write, I am intrigued by the relation between peace lilies and a cobra, interesting my friend! This whole poem is truly wonderful! I truly enjoyed reading this remarkable piece this morning! What a brilliant poem, such a delightful verse, Great Work!!

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/25/2013 5:41:00 AM

I figured that out

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 4:09:00 PM

Sara, was that a sneeze? I never heard of cobra blooms before. How unique. I think maybe you meant to say disturbed in the last line? But it got a typo.