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Peace Is In Isolation

Present condition
Shows no act of contrition
When the population
Facing much desolation
Chooses condemnation
Provoking alienation
Clouding ways of ramification
That could lead to unification
That in making such selection 
We receive no protection
Deaf to the heavens revelation
And peace remains in isolation.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright 05.05.11

Copyright © Caroline Cécile Delacroix | Year Posted 2011

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Robert A. Dufresne Date: 5/8/2011 6:51:00 PM well done Caroline,, very well done. Could be put to music or even rap ..but good positive rap. Is there such a thing? If not you could start it with this piece for sure. Or a modern folk song. Cool Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/7/2011 8:25:00 PM C.C.,, a wonderful poem,, peace witing on us... enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 5/6/2011 6:07:00 PM this was an awesome write good job on it!! cory Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/6/2011 3:07:00 PM Unique and powerfully penned Caroline.. a powerhouse statement of wonderful rhyme sequences my friend.. great message to ponder in your lovely lines so prolific luv..happy weekend.. Login to Reply

Roxanna Johnson Date: 5/6/2011 2:03:00 PM I enjoyed how this poem flowed when trying to read it and the end of every line ends with a word containing 'ion' Beautiful write Dear Caroline. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/6/2011 12:28:00 PM It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry today Caroline. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joe Flach Date: 5/6/2011 9:11:00 AM Beautifully written. Great message and effective use of monorhyme. Many times poems such as these read as being forced to fit the pattern - not this one. It flows beautifully and stays on topic in a powerful way. Well done. Joe Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/6/2011 5:42:00 AM Enjoyed your monorhyme poem on peace nice expressions deep and meaningful, Caroline Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 5/5/2011 10:46:00 PM Deep n meaningful stuff babe in these trying times of heinous crimes and utter devestation where will we go the flag to show without some aggravation ps you know us men all thumbs and then without our trousers with foot in mouth we make amends if lady sweet allows us love Don Login to Reply