Peace Is In Isolation

Present condition Shows no act of contrition When the population Facing much desolation Chooses condemnation Provoking alienation Clouding ways of ramification That could lead to unification That in making such selection We receive no protection Deaf to the heavens revelation And peace remains in isolation. By CarolineCécile Copyright 05.05.11

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2011 6:51:00 PM

well done Caroline,, very well done. Could be put to music or even rap ..but good positive rap. Is there such a thing? If not you could start it with this piece for sure. Or a modern folk song. Cool

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 8:25:00 PM

C.C.,, a wonderful poem,, peace witing on us... enjoyed,..p.d.

Cory Long

Date: 5/6/2011 6:07:00 PM

this was an awesome write good job on it!! cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/6/2011 3:07:00 PM

Unique and powerfully penned Caroline.. a powerhouse statement of wonderful rhyme sequences my friend.. great message to ponder in your lovely lines so prolific luv..happy weekend..

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 5/6/2011 2:03:00 PM

I enjoyed how this poem flowed when trying to read it and the end of every line ends with a word containing 'ion' Beautiful write Dear Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/6/2011 12:28:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry today Caroline. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol

Joe Flach

Date: 5/6/2011 9:11:00 AM

Beautifully written. Great message and effective use of monorhyme. Many times poems such as these read as being forced to fit the pattern - not this one. It flows beautifully and stays on topic in a powerful way. Well done. Joe

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2011 5:42:00 AM

Enjoyed your monorhyme poem on peace nice expressions deep and meaningful, Caroline

Don Johnson

Date: 5/5/2011 10:46:00 PM

Deep n meaningful stuff babe in these trying times of heinous crimes and utter devestation where will we go the flag to show without some aggravation ps you know us men all thumbs and then without our trousers with foot in mouth we make amends if lady sweet allows us love Don