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Peace In the Hills

She walks among the flowers up the hills toward home, watching for the eagles that surely they have roamed, The cliffs have signs of nesting where the eagles soar, over the hills of trees and where the ocean roars, She not afraid of eagles or even what is not, all she wants is peace but just doesn't get a lot, The eagles make a lot of noise, they don't seem to mind, as she climbs the hill the eagles know that she is kind, She smiles at all their antics as they take off on flight right into the sun that shines in the morning light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/25/2011 6:44:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Louisa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/24/2011 9:40:00 AM
Howdy Louisa. I'm not exactly sure what this means but it was still a pretty good write. Who or what fears the eagles? Why wait until the night ? A little more substance for clarity would make this an even better write. I look forward to seeing more from you. Randy aka Rockman
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