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PDA: the next slam

Never again will you send my friend a frown you will be shot down and you won't wear the crown I as a doctor myself am ashamed to be in your presence as far a the destroyer she is the pure slam essence I am just a boy with the power of millions you can't break anyone down with your billions you don't see that your slams are not well written and the only thing we get is nothing far from bitten so Doc are you ready to pay all the fines? because in the end I write the last slam line back up the boat you'll never cross my moat my archers are in place all aimed at your face if you need me I'll be here sharpening my sword's steel waiting for an actual challenge worth the fight and the balance get back up or walk away but in the end, I must say: my personal display of affliction isn't countered by your decision

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2013 8:17:00 PM
Ryan, I'm having a poem contest for myself. In honor of a few poem dedicated my way.... if you like can you please enter this poem, if not already.... this one is on my favorite list. xox~ Linda
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:28:00 PM
NICE ONE RED, YOUR BOTTOM HALF IS A GOOD SLAM. KEEP THEM FLOWING*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:28:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Ryan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:05:00 PM
Wow! Red, thans for sending Doc. them words. He needs to know he ain't taking this slamming thing in good fun. have you read *Royal Trevino* slam to the Doc. she is a teen herself..She wrote him a cute slam.. And slammed the Doc.,.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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