Pda: the Next Slam

Never again will you send my friend a frown
you will be shot down and you won't wear the crown
I as a doctor myself am ashamed to be in your presence
as far a the destroyer she is the pure slam essence 
I am just a boy with the power of millions
you can't break anyone down with your billions 
you don't see that your slams are not well written 
and the only thing we get is nothing far from bitten
so Doc are you ready to pay all the fines?
because in the end I write the last slam line

back up the boat
you'll never cross my moat
my archers are in place
all aimed at your face
if you need me I'll be here
sharpening my sword's steel
waiting for an actual challenge
worth the fight and the balance 
get back up or walk away
but in the end, I must say:

my personal display of affliction 
isn't countered by your decision

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/12/2013 8:17:00 PM
Ryan, I'm having a poem contest for myself. In honor of a few poem dedicated my way.... if you like can you please enter this poem, if not already.... this one is on my favorite list. xox~ Linda
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:28:00 PM
NICE ONE RED, YOUR BOTTOM HALF IS A GOOD SLAM. KEEP THEM FLOWING*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:28:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Ryan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:05:00 PM
Wow! Red, thans for sending Doc. them words. He needs to know he ain't taking this slamming thing in good fun. have you read *Royal Trevino* slam to the Doc. she is a teen herself..She wrote him a cute slam.. And slammed the Doc.,.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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