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for war it tears and never mends forbearance key to make amends or future generations rend for war will tear and never mend

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Date: 10/11/2023 8:29:00 PM
Yes, very sad.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/12/2023 8:12:00 PM
Heart wrenching ~x
Date: 10/11/2023 3:20:00 PM
powerful with a well said message. I feel sometimes that war will never end...'wars and rumors of war.' As long as power and greed are the ruling force, I guess war is inevitable. I enjoyed your creation. Have a lovely evening, Sara
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/12/2023 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Sara. For such large brained animals who believe we’re so smart we really should know and be better than this. sigh xomo
Date: 10/11/2023 11:20:00 AM
Always succinct and brilliant Maureen; but I feel that wars will never end. People value their beliefs over other people's beliefs. A sickness without cure. Forgive my rant. Thanks for your write, Hugs
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/11/2023 1:00:00 PM
We’re too smart to function as a species I always say ;),
Date: 10/11/2023 10:41:00 AM
So true and well written
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/11/2023 1:30:00 PM
That's the rumor anyway
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/11/2023 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I have my moments ;),
Date: 10/11/2023 10:11:00 AM
Well stated Maureen!! Seems it never ends, and for sure never mends!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/11/2023 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Mark. It doesn’t seem to end indeed; seems we’re the only species hell bent on destroying ourselves.

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