Pause

A tightening jaw
A silent tear rolls down my cheek
I remember you

lost lovehaiku

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Alley Poe

May 17, 2009 at 8:32 PM

I can feel the pause...Great write -Alley

Cesar Cantu

May 17, 2009 at 8:19 PM

Ouch...reality does stop in moments like that one...there's when you realize how everything is a bunch of hay and maleable forks and spoons, made out of plastic, of course; thanks for sharing!!

Sharon Winter

May 17, 2009 at 4:22 PM

Aww, too heartbreaking. Excellent haiku, but so very sad. Love, shar

Lena Townsend

May 17, 2009 at 4:06 PM

This is a sad write my friend, but full of heart and soul. Well done. I love it. It shows so much sensitivity and so much love. You express the hurt so well here. Peace be with you. Smiles from Lolita