Patriotism

Dear America

I love you so madly 
will try to explain why.

You taught me to preesh
mom's cheesecaky escapades
into visions forbidden

So it still goes for women.

Many sighs abound.. is anyone listening?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Wisps of somethingness or nothingness, who knows?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 8:53 AM
I'm listening. Did I hear 'cheesecake?'
Jones Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 9:24 AM
close. as is my habit, i adjectived the noun.. and since it's not in the dictionary i can't be sure of the spelling... maybe cheesecakey or cheesecakie?
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