Patriotic People

Patriots we are
Ashen through war
To a more promising today.
Ruminant mammals as warlords
Insinuates the future of glory to come.
Open to emigration from across waters
Today is our day
Significant to determine a stronger unity.

People of the United States of America
Educate your minds innately.
Our focus is for greatness in a better way.
Plausibility is our qualifying state.
Love, peace, and harmony are what we search for nowadays.
Equanimity is our religious situation.

P eople of unity 
A ssemble as one
T o form a greater purpose.
R ebels for a cause
I s not a threat to others
O nly a stronger walk.
T his is our country.
I deals are now.
C ome patriotisms unto the clouds to celebrate.

P arade so grandiose 
E njoyed by all
O stentatious vainglorious
P raise triumphant
L ong live the USA.
E nvision events that fulfills our people and our states.
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PENNED ON JUNE 30, 2014!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 5:43 AM
two for the price of one Verlena great pens congrats on win hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:27 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Verlena! Brilliant work!
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:45 PM
fabulous acrostic Verlena - a lovely patriotic poem - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Verlena, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
Bordner Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:51 PM
I admire how you take command of the language Verlena. Many gifted writers remain intimidated by the spirit and grammar of lettered language, you have clearly achieved mastery of words, and create inspiring, original harmony of concept and vision in your work. There is a magnificent legal and moral paradox in this poem. J.A.B.
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Justin... The 4th July puts us all in patriotic mood... Have good one... Verlena
Deschler Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 4:45 PM
This poem is very appropriate with Independence Day coming up, just around the corner! You truly captured the pride that we, Americans, have in our country. Great work, Verlena! I hope you and your family have a Happy 4th of July!
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Thanks Kelly for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Kiser Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Well done! Happy 4th.
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Thanks M.L. and the same to you... Verlena
Pickett Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Acrostic is by far my favorite form so naturally I had to read yours. You certainly hit a home run here my friend! Good work..:JP)
Walker  Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Thanks Jared for your supportive remarks... Verlena
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