Patricia

Do you remember when - we looked into each others eyes. Then our souls sparked together - we where electrified.. I remember when we first touch - our bodies turned into mush. Passion of our hearts beating fast - blood rushing mind numbness mad. Nakedness into our own married tree - vine with roses I clearly see. Across the sea into the clouded sky - your lushes skin is all mine. Many years we do have - time for ourselves love in our hands has been so divine Our bond will not be broke - I love this woman - that is no Joke..

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 3:32:00 AM

beautiful,so sweet,tribute to your woman--bravo--charma

Ronald Bingham

Date: 5/28/2009 9:24:00 AM

Jack this is awesome and I know Patricia feels the same way as you. Love is like wine it only gets better with age. God Bless you both. Ron

Christy Hardy

Date: 5/28/2009 4:11:00 AM

I love this poem. It is one that most women would love to be reading from their husbands....always, Christy