Patio

suite morning music 
surrounds one deaf man

zephyrs trace my face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chircop Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 12:35 PM
A Zephyr Breeze...Breezy indeed...Arlo!!!
Parker Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Face washed with wind. Eyes shut. Pax. :-)
Nuwas Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Nice
Parker Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Thanks. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 12:50 PM
I really enjoyed this one
Parker Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 8:38 PM
Thanks., AD Always appreciated. :o))
Romios Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Hello, Arlo. A fave for me. So few words, yet so powerful. “Zephyrs trace my face,” zowie.. Utterly beautiful . Pangie. This is outstanding,))))
Parker Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:36 AM
You are too kind, P. :-)
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:05 PM
This is a really expressive, effective senryu, Arlo! Janice
Parker Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:29 PM
Thanks 4 your comments and visit, JC. :o)
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