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Patience

Hidden in Winter Under the earth's cold cover Spring patiently waits

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/27/2025 7:59:00 PM
A life as if still breath it birth Covered in a winter chill hibernation Heart beat such few times it slow Creation, creature of some form it lives Breathing, patience it appears to be dead But beneath captures defying soul Or what should you call that to which not human It still carries a spirit to which you breathe
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Jeanne Hicks
Date: 1/28/2025 3:47:00 PM
Thank you for sharing these words with me.
Date: 1/27/2025 10:48:00 AM
Hello Jennie, i look forward to Spring. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2025 3:03:00 PM
Hello Jennie, I am looking forward to spring to. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Jeanne Hicks
Date: 1/27/2025 12:06:00 PM
I am really looking forward to it too. Especially this year.
Date: 11/19/2016 10:21:00 AM
A home run haiku Nature and time intertwined Perfection indeed
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