Pathway To My Dreams

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When the light from the setting sun Makes a shining path on the sea, Am I the only one who can see it? Is this path solely meant for me? Is it a pathway to my dreams? Do I dare follow it to see?

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/2/2020 2:00:00 PM

We do tend to think this way about natural phenomena, that they speak directly to us. You've captured the process well, Sir Poet! Thanks, Gershon

Clive Blake
Date: 8/3/2020 1:48:00 AM

Hi Gershore, Yes a poet's imagination can indeed get the better of them at times! Thanks for your comment. :) ~ Clive