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Pathway To My Dreams

When the light from the setting sun
Makes a shining path on the sea,
Am I the only one who can see it?
Is this path solely meant for me?
Is it a pathway to my dreams?
Do I dare follow it to see?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 2:00 PM
We do tend to think this way about natural phenomena, that they speak directly to us. You've captured the process well, Sir Poet! Thanks, Gershon
Blake Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 1:48 AM
Hi Gershore, Yes a poet's imagination can indeed get the better of them at times! Thanks for your comment. :) ~ Clive
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