Ivor Davies Poet Rhyme

Pathetic Stew

What if all I wrote was rot
would anybody care one jot.
What if all I spelt was rong
would this detract from poet's song.
What if grammer too was flawed
would my writings come outlawed.
What if every theme I spoke
gave rise to thoughts that made you choke.
Would this detract from all I do
when writing such pathetic stew.
Or would you find it all just fine
if cloaked in rhythm and in rhyme.

Ivor G Davies

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Jan Allison August 8, 2015 at 6:20 PM I write for one person and that is me Ivor - thankfully most people seem to like what I write and if I read a poem I think is 'rot' i simply don't comment:-) hugs jan xxx

Pam Deremer August 8, 2015 at 5:37 PM I think you should write what ever you feel. Thank you for your poem.