Pathetic Lies

Formed metal burning
three shots penetrate and kill...
Justify that one!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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June 28, 2018 at 3:45 PM
George.. I enjoyed reading your write this afternoon. I had a couple of down hours and wanted to take in some creative poetry. I'm glad I came across your interesting work! PS Thank you for your comments on my writes. You make my day!
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June 29, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thanks for the comments and have a good one...... George
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