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Path of Life

You always wished you could do things right maybe you still do you always wished you would never stray upon the path of life You always tried to do things perfect but the secret, there is none that you can never go wrong upon the path of life Each step you take every move you make builds you closer to the end But then again there is none, There is no end upon the path of life
Oct. 15, 2009

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Date: 1/18/2015 12:26:00 AM
Beautiful, very deep!
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Date: 11/25/2011 6:51:00 AM
I really like this a lot. I wonder who its about. It reminds me of my brother. Do you know him? LOL J/k. But seriously, i read some of your other poems to and i love you truth and passion... keep posting! Windyann
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:00:00 PM
Hahah, Thanks!! ~ some poems I write are from a friends point of view or what theyre going through, but most come straight from my soul, I sit down pencil in hand and it flows onto paper :)lol Thanks for your comment!

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