Path of Life

You have set for us a path that can always run straight,
               a path of life to love to choose restore and create
  
      This path of life confirms a truly unique freedom at hand,
          sun shining bright explores the path far across the land.                                                                                      

       Impressive light that opens many eyes so they can see,
         how bright and warm the blessings are this path of life is free.

       Some people claim their rich some claim to be really poor,
           through love and inspiration this path of life holds more
     
      Enjoy each awakening day through faith in immaculate conception,
       What incredible resounding effects God's word over minds perception                                                                                       

         A life of love and goodness giving to replenish some lost soul,
          It is up to you to choose God's path for life will be more in control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/6/2010 2:48:00 AM
Beautifully written advise, Peter. So much truth and sentiment in this piece...I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:44:00 AM
I admire your faith, Peter, and enjoyed the spiritually uplifting message in this excellent poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You make an excellent addition to the Soup family. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:39:00 PM
Wise advice. Thanks for sharing, Peter.
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:39:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:55:00 PM
wonderful, Peter a very clever and impressive poem! enjoyed..LeeAnn
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:32:00 PM
Excellent Rhyme, Peter and words of wisdom and truth! Goes to my favs. I enjoyed this inspirational write. Have a great weekend...well what's left of it, anyway. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 10/16/2010 3:25:00 PM
Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Peter. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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