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For Brian Strand's Your Choice O Poetry Contest 27 May 2025

path hiku



                   /           /     dusty tattered shoes
                /           /   stood on long forgotten paths~
             {_____}              a race just finished
      (`````       __ )   {____},,,,,
        /                  (  __           )
     /                 /
  /                   /
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May 27, 2025 at 1:24 AM
Very clever words and art, the whole package. Congrats on your placement ... CayCay
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