Path

to strive n fail at lifes travail, i know the path you speak, yet i know the struggle failed, we altogether seek. we go on...not weak... pardon ... re Catie Lindsays "Outlands" Don
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Wesley Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Love that first line Don, it's a great entry to this verse that stretches the imagination asto how we cope with the miserable condition. ! :)
Sivey Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Awesome display of illustrious wisdom here Don! I really liked this harmonious poem showing great promise ahead! Lovely write my friend! Excellent Work!!
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