Patently Absurd

My people and I are threatened all over the world For me to write of 'flowers and fragrance,' patently absurd

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Terry Flood

Date: 10/30/2023 4:49:00 PM

But we must write of flowers and fragrance or laughter and giggles. To smile or laugh in the face of tyranny is (even though I’m pretty much atheist) a God given strength. You write on, GW, we shall admire your strength of character and never judge your subject matter. Flaming heck… I just made a speech! And I stand by every word.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/30/2023 3:22:00 PM

I agree with you...the absurdity of wrapping up the world's events in flowers and fragrance. If I were in your shoes, I'd be angry on the inside. I feel helpless so much of the time witnessing the stupidity of politicians who breed hate through their decisions and actions. I could go on but won't. Needless to say, your poem struck a chord with me. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/30/2023 4:48:00 AM

I would throw a big hug around your shoulders! I hate what is going on. I feel like we are already at the precipice of a world war. Hate is not the answer..the puppets don’t understand what they are doing! We pray for peace!

R J. Elless

Date: 10/30/2023 3:08:00 AM

I hear that my friend. It proves your faith. There is a light. Absurd bareley describes it.

Deb M

Date: 10/30/2023 2:49:00 AM

Hi BB….l am so sad and sorry for what you ,your loved ones and people are going through…l can't even begin to imagine how that feels for you my friend Sending kindness and cuddles to you and your family…Love Debx

Anthony Biaanco

Date: 10/29/2023 11:52:00 PM

Hi Gershon. So much truth in this that its painful. There are still billions that stand with goodness, but they stand in the shadows. Stay well my friend, Anthony