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Patch of Summer Night

The summer is here,
sweet songs come forth
maybe there are no more doors,
hopefully this is the night of nights....

Let no one kill their rainbows
although, the world tries
They're not sure of the slow death of time
never really letting it go...

Cast aside the master of misrepresentation
They cannot say with certainty
why love that form and always flies away
with the eagles of tomorrow that never stays...

It was just a patch of summer night
warmth upon their skin so sweet
as they lay next to the other
with flames forming through their minds..

Brooke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 11:00:00 PM
PS..... on my good friends Cheryl's poem, THE ALAMO, I read you had a recent visit. :) I live one hour and a half away from the Alamo... I will visit again this coming Mother's day... Nice to know, a soup poet, was there... Linda
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Date: 5/7/2014 10:58:00 PM
Hi Brooke, love the romantic feeling here... such a beautiful poem..Linda
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Date: 5/7/2014 12:35:00 PM
Dearest Brooke, would that we could see those flames forming through our minds, past the misrepresentation. We could avoid so much heartbreak. A beautiful poem! Luv & Hugs;) Ben
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Ben.. and you a re so right...
Date: 5/7/2014 6:42:00 AM
When flames burn in the mind , A volcano of passion is ready to erupt in the heart . Another joy to read .
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 7:14:00 AM
thank you so much Darren.... hugs
Date: 5/7/2014 3:44:00 AM
"Eagle of tomorrow", what a phrase. This one is full of melancholy beauty and yearning.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 7:13:00 AM
thank you Monterey... what a nice comment..

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