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Pastoral Redoubt

subdued alpine slope blanched flock servile bleating sheep shepherd's virile staff

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/14/2011 4:47:00 AM
Hi Stephen. Wonderful use of words in this great piece. Eamon
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:15:00 PM
Interesting words used in your haiku, Stephen. Very expressive.
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:43:00 PM
I can see the scene..That staff was a tool that saved the lives of sheep just like the shephard with his staff saves our lives..Sara
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