Pastoral Redoubt

subdued alpine slope
blanched flock servile bleating sheep
shepherd's virile staff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Duffin Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Hi Stephen. Wonderful use of words in this great piece. Eamon
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Interesting words used in your haiku, Stephen. Very expressive.
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 4:43 PM
I can see the scene..That staff was a tool that saved the lives of sheep just like the shephard with his staff saves our lives..Sara
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