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Pastoral Recall

PASTORAL Yes I remember when this was all fields Patchworked across the vale to chalky down The cornfield and the pastures and the weald That fed the hearts and bodies of the town Yes I recall the footpath that we took To reach the hamlet and the blessed lake O’er styles and hedges and the little brook Where we would stop to give our thirst some slake Yes I can feel the wind upon my face That cooled our sweat as we ascend the hill And as we climbed our minds rose up apace Then widened loosing bonds to our free will Yes I now hold the memory in my heart And see the images as I near sleep Though they are gone they still remain a part Of my own world, reside in spirit deep Submitted: 15 August 2019 N/A in contest: Any Poem You Want to Write 180 words or less By Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 9/4/2020 1:55:00 PM
A truly atmospheric and excellent poem.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/4/2020 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Gary.
Date: 9/28/2019 1:05:00 PM
This is really good. Congrats.
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Date: 9/7/2019 5:58:00 PM
Hello Geoffrey Brewer, we all have memories of how things were after the big changes. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/28/2019 9:13:00 AM
Hello Darlene. I hope the memories you have, bring you pleasure. Thanks for your communication.
Date: 8/15/2019 11:25:00 PM
G'day Geoffrey … really well written and rhymed. Nostalgia brings back some wonderful times - thank you Geoffrey - Lindsay
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/16/2019 4:48:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind comments, Lindsay
Date: 8/15/2019 10:56:00 AM
Geoffrey, A beautiful recollection. I miss the creek-side walks, spelunking in grotto & cave, and search for elusive crawdads. -Richard
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/15/2019 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for sharing that, Richard.
Date: 8/15/2019 8:33:00 AM
Beautifully expressed. Near our home I would drive along a road with gorgeous apple orchards on both sides. One day all the trees were chopped down. There were hundreds of them laying on the ground. I felt such deep sadness, like witnessing bodies on a battlefield.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/15/2019 1:02:00 PM
How sad, but lovely memories. Thank you, Richard.

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