Pastoral

Inspired by Brian Strand's contest Pastoral poem


Branches rise in praise
Wind as music floats to heaven
Birds sing praises, joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ch Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:29 AM
beautiful
Keogh Jr. Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 3:12 PM
I like this, especially with Easter on the horizon. Thank you for your kind remarks and I must say that they matter greatly to me. I was told repeatedly growing up that I was no good and never be good at anything. It still haunts me to a small degree. Regards, Gerard.
Witt-King Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 10:40 PM
All of creation sings in praise. Have you ever heard a recording of crickets speeded up? It actually becomes musical. This goes to my favorites Doris, wonderful!
Haick Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Excellent Pastoral, dear Doris....Thanks for reading and commenting on mine...Peace, Audrey
Henderson Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 6:08 PM
Very nice Haiku Doris. You asked where I live. I'm in Florence about an hour from Myrtle Beach, SC. We are trying to get positioned to move to the country in Greenville, Spartanburg area, SC. Charles Henderson
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Nicely done, Doris! Wishing you success in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Ahhh...this is a beauty! Good luck, Doris!~ Love, Carrie
Nunn Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 7:59 AM
A short one...but it says it all...good write...Danny
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