Pasties

two abreast a wall of flesh i left my coat at the hat rack from my mind consumed a looping tune that need be written down as for what i found on my finger tips tapping from a played plucked string that made her sing my score board pre prepared paper squared needing no licking self adhesive to please to post what i wrote written on those sticky notes

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/15/2020 12:24:00 AM

Cute one.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/18/2020 5:19:00 PM

I'm happy that you at least found it "cute" Richard. I wasn't trying to write too profoundly because I've found I loose a lot of non thinking readers along the way. Though I'm ambidextrous I still wouldn't do the biblical hand for a hand, or eye for an eye; and they way I see the world...most folks wouldn't but they would cast a first stone at me for saying they weren't holier then art.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/14/2020 4:13:00 PM

I really like this one. xomo!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/14/2020 11:59:00 PM

I think much of my own stuff is fluff that certainly wouldn't warrant a paper printing. x

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/14/2020 10:03:00 PM

Thanks Maureen. I've been writing all along. I'm just now being a little more selective then when I just used to submit every written word lol.