Pasties

women
i urge you
to get rolling

the dough
for to make a 
difference in the

lives of
others so
they can cry

so better
yet set
your

bread
behind
and pick

up and
chop an
onion for

fake tears
are better
than no

thing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:57 PM
This one buzzes. Makes me want to know more.
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December 17, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Got tons, thank you ;),
Connelly Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Maureen, do you need an onion???
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Oh. Heh heh. Yeah, my opinion on the matter has come through in some of my poetry. Nice one ;), xomo!
Connelly Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:33 PM
Truth be told I'll get in trouble but it was prompted by a comment made on David McHattcies (I spelled that wrong) last submission shhh lol. I'm evil.
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