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Pastel Sunrise

Dawn painted morning's horizon with a blush. Beauty I see when I wake gives me such a rush. Shades of cornsilk yellow, lavender and peach, but far too distant to ever be within my reach.

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Fj Thomas

Date: 6/21/2022 5:20:00 PM

So peacefully beautiful Jenna. Thank you very much for the welcome back :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 5:25:00 PM

I am delighted that you’re here! Thanks for your thoughts on this one.

Ann Foster

Date: 6/8/2022 3:46:00 PM

"within my reach" yes... sounds lovely. Very powerful imagery. Ann

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 5:24:00 PM

I’m glad you like it, Ann.

Mark Koplin

Date: 6/1/2022 1:27:00 PM

Beautiful! I don’t think I’ve ever heard a color compared to cornsilk. I like it!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 5:24:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mark.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/31/2022 8:31:00 AM

Beautiful monoku, what a dawn!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/1/2022 6:45:00 AM

Thanks, M.L., but I've altered the form to widen the horizon.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2022 2:48:00 PM

You captured the dawn and sunrise well Jenna, I love those amazing colours just before that spark of sunlight appears. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/1/2022 6:45:00 AM

Thank you very much, Tom.