Jenna Logan Poet Monoku

Pastel Sunrise

Dawn painted morning's horizon with a blush.
Beauty I see when I wake gives me such a rush.
Shades of cornsilk yellow, lavender and peach,
but far too distant to ever be within my reach.

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FJ Thomas June 21, 2022 at 5:20 PM So peacefully beautiful Jenna. Thank you very much for the welcome back :) Jenna Logan June 21, 2022 at 5:25 PM I am delighted that you’re here! Thanks for your thoughts on this one.

Ann Foster June 8, 2022 at 3:46 PM "within my reach" yes... sounds lovely. Very powerful imagery. Ann Jenna Logan June 21, 2022 at 5:24 PM I’m glad you like it, Ann.

Mark Koplin June 1, 2022 at 1:27 PM Beautiful! I don’t think I’ve ever heard a color compared to cornsilk. I like it! Jenna Logan June 21, 2022 at 5:24 PM Thanks so much, Mark.

M. L. Kiser May 31, 2022 at 8:31 AM Beautiful monoku, what a dawn! Jenna Logan June 1, 2022 at 6:45 AM Thanks, M.L., but I've altered the form to widen the horizon.

Tom Cunningham May 30, 2022 at 2:48 PM You captured the dawn and sunrise well Jenna, I love those amazing colours just before that spark of sunlight appears. Tom Jenna Logan June 1, 2022 at 6:45 AM Thank you very much, Tom.