Pastel

Pastel colors upon the edge
As the sun breaks away
the night, crickets and katydids
still entertain the day  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:20 PM
a sweet picture of the edge of day. Lovely, Sara.
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:52 PM
short and sweet rhyme Sara:-) I had to discover what a katydids was - and now I know:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:21 PM
haha, you never knew katydid. It's a funny name, isn't it?
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Colorful write Sara! Expressive though short,, great work!
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:29 AM
- Beautiful colors in a beautiful short poem, Sara - Lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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