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Past Venus and Mars

The Moon slipped Mimosa* a drink The Star blushed and then blink-blinked A comet gazed at this scene from afar Zoomed away past Venus and Mars A perfect storm was brewing on Saturn All the rings were creating new patterns Phantasmagoric, like the sun's wild corona Dramatic as a master-matador in Barcelona All this took place last June When newlyweds revel in honeymoons As for me, I turned out the light And kissed the Night-Sky goodnight ___________________________________________ *Mimosa is one of the brightest stars in the night sky

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Date: 6/22/2021 5:04:00 PM
Oh I love this one Gershon! Beautifully written :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 6:45:00 PM
Anne, I appreciate your kind words and encouragement. Have a wonderful evening! ~ gw
Date: 6/22/2021 3:48:00 PM
Fabulous pen, a brilliant mind Great one, g.W, Pangie xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 6:39:00 PM
Greetings, Pangie! Thanks for the enthusiasm over this one. Hope you are having a spectacular day! Light and Love, gw
Date: 6/22/2021 3:47:00 PM
Very Nice. Thanks for sharing!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 6:35:00 PM
And thank YOU, Luvenia, for your visit and kind words. Light and Joy, Gershon
Date: 6/22/2021 6:34:00 AM
Very romantic but sad in the end. Nicely done, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 6:34:00 PM
You're right, Kim. Even my wife has told me that my kisses are quite sad. So now I'm kissing the NIght-sky-map goodnight -- you know, I'm in 'rehab.' lol. ~ gw
Date: 6/21/2021 9:35:00 PM
Mimosa is also a beautiful tree! It appears you ducked! Aloha! Rico
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 6:29:00 PM
Yes, mimosa certainly is a beautiful tree. I'd forgotten that somehow. Thanks, Rico
Date: 6/21/2021 9:16:00 PM
just beautiful the last stanza //
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2021 6:24:00 PM
Glad you like that last stanza, Mahtab. Thanks for your encouragement! ~ gw

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